Red Sands

[fillyra]

Originally Posted by bladeking77

I think that Order of 4 levels refers to medals being able to go up to 4th level.
Your pet can already be called in battle, gain experience e.t.c.. That part refers to some kind of familiar which is either that super-beholder Asmadeo, or something else.
I also think that a "New race of Undead Lizardmen." sounds better that just "Undead lizardmen!", but that's just my opinion.
Other than that, you've done a good job translating it.

Thanks! I corrected the original post. Now those parts look much better.