Brothers Of The Sky Premiere TONIGHT!

FOZ_1983 · #1 10-20-2009, 05:48 PM

Might want to edit the start a bit, the pic of a spitfire and hurricane looks a bit poor (outlines visible etc) also whoevers talking... talks FAR TO MUCH and really quietly, can hardly hear them.

At 3.30, we hear the guns shooting before we even saw the target, its only when the target was hit did we realise what was in your sights. (i might be nit picking here)

At 4.10 your shooting at a HE111, granted you destroy it (good kill

) but look how much damage you took, shouldnt really of been dead on his 6. (again maybe nit picking)

At 4.50, same as above. (again im prob nit picking) Oil on cockpit looked good though, well caught.

At 6.37 after landing the hurricane it would of been nice to see the battle scared hurrie maybe either land on grass or taxi onto the grass away from the main runway (nit picking i know)

At 6.50 the spitfire is a mess!!!! haha i like it, great stuff. Good touch

At 8.40 an nice crash landing, minimal damage done though runway is now out of use until its cleaned up lol.

At 8.50 onwards, again its hard to hear whats being said but could just be my speakers?? even though all sound is up to 100% and the talking goes on a while. They sound a little "young" to if that makes sense?? (again i could be nit picking)

On the whole its an ok clip, was nice to see the hurricane take a pounding and still make it back in one piece!! thats what we like to see

10/10 for effort.

ThatYoungGameGuy · #2 10-20-2009, 05:54 PM

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Originally Posted by FOZ_1983

Might want to edit the start a bit, the pic of a spitfire and hurricane looks a bit poor (outlines visible etc) also whoevers talking... talks FAR TO MUCH and really quietly, can hardly hear them.

At 3.30, we hear the guns shooting before we even saw the target, its only when the target was hit did we realise what was in your sights. (i might be nit picking here)

At 4.10 your shooting at a HE111, granted you destroy it (good kill

) but look how much damage you took, shouldnt really of been dead on his 6. (again maybe nit picking)

At 4.50, same as above. (again im prob nit picking) Oil on cockpit looked good though, well caught.

At 6.37 after landing the hurricane it would of been nice to see the battle scared hurrie maybe either land on grass or taxi onto the grass away from the main runway (nit picking i know)

At 6.50 the spitfire is a mess!!!! haha i like it, great stuff. Good touch

At 8.40 an nice crash landing, minimal damage done though runway is now out of use until its cleaned up lol.

At 8.50 onwards, again its hard to hear whats being said but could just be my speakers?? even though all sound is up to 100% and the talking goes on a while. They sound a little "young" to if that makes sense?? (again i could be nit picking)

On the whole its an ok clip, was nice to see the hurricane take a pounding and still make it back in one piece!! thats what we like to see

10/10 for effort.

thanks for all the comments guys , and yeah i'm 15 so the voices probably do sound a little young!

ThatYoungGameGuy · #3 10-20-2009, 05:55 PM

however, the spit was meant to take a pounding, as that was the story for the episode.

FOZ_1983 · #4 10-20-2009, 06:08 PM

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however, the spit was meant to take a pounding, as that was the story for the episode.

It took a pounding alright lol. Looked good.

As for being 15... yeah that does explain the young voice lol.

Reddisback · #5 10-20-2009, 06:42 PM

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Originally Posted by FOZ_1983

It took a pounding alright lol. Looked good.

As for being 15... yeah that does explain the young voice lol.

On your Youtube vid i thaught you were older?

FOZ_1983 · #6 10-20-2009, 07:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Reddisback

On your Youtube vid i thaught you were older?

To be honest i had no idea how old he was. I assumed he was older...alot older when he mentioned writing a column for a posh upperclass paper.

Didnt actually know he was 15. Do now though

ThatYoungGameGuy · #7 10-20-2009, 08:05 PM

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Originally Posted by FOZ_1983

To be honest i had no idea how old he was. I assumed he was older...alot older when he mentioned writing a column for a posh upperclass paper.

Didnt actually know he was 15. Do now though

lol thanks

FOZ_1983 · #8 10-20-2009, 08:19 PM

No probs

trk29 · #9 10-21-2009, 03:30 AM

Very nicely done enjoyed the music also.

phlux · #10 10-21-2009, 07:18 AM

Well done man. Might I suggest for the next episode, just for the sake of filming, perhaps turn the HUD all the way off and fly it in realistic mode so you can get some outside views of the aircraft. Another perspective couldn't hurt. Anyway, great job.