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managed to find a few small mistakes.
also, thanks to this thread I found out you can do stuff with the princess dummy during training ![]() 1st pic: King Kerus instead of king Kerus 2nd: comma after wonderful + demon's instead of demons 3rd: managed/manage or falls/fell 4th: comma after well 5th: 'an' instead of 'the' would be better and there was a first of all without a comma after it somewhere but I forgot to take a screenshot of it. |
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