Fast Kill, Slow Motion (new movie up)

[Les]

Nice video. I thought the slow motion and music worked well, but so did the titles and camera-work. It was the clear and deliberate approach to the presenting of the action that appealed most to me. The 'story' structure, the order in which you showed the action playing out, could have been different, but as the maker of the video you get to make that choice, so, that's all good, as long as you explored other options and didn't miss an opportunity to tell the story in a more effective way. The only thing that bothered me about the video was the voice we can hear over the 'radio'. I was a bit confused about whose voice that was and what it was saying. I probably would have made that more clear, by using more titles to talk back to it if it wasn't the same pilot we were watching, or just cut it out altogether with some tricky sound editing. All in all though, really good video imo.

[Freycinet]

Tricky sound editing, that's exactly it.. - It was unrelated chatter but I didn't find any good way to edit it out, with my rather modest skills. Thanks for your analysis, really interesting to read, because I get very little feedback like that. Any remarks on how you think the story could otherwise have been told are very welcome. I am having a lot of fun learning story-telling basics, and I'm certainly still a newbie in that field, which is fine, because it means there's only one way, namely UP!

[SharpeXB]

Beautiful video!
CoD is amazing in so many ways