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Originally Posted by Dohi64
no problem. although if you went with manage/falls, then the whole thing should be in present tense (turns out, slips).
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Oh, yah, good point. Here's how I ended up changing it (present tense seemed to work better for me):
qmsg_rage_0=The chest, which the mage gives to you, turns out to be pretty heavy and slips out of your hands. You manage to catch the artifact before it falls to the floor, but you badly hurt your hand as it strikes against the sharp edge.<br><br>After this sharp pain, everything grows dark before your eyes, and you feel dizzy and disoriented. You seem to hear some voices! And they are coming from the chest...
So let me know if you think that's okay or change the above to how you think it should go and I'll paste it in there...
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Originally Posted by Dohi64
and here's some more.
1, Freedom, with a capital 'f'
2, 'no, I don't remember' and 'so, what's your name' (2 missing commas)
3, the apostrophe
4, 'take poison damage' instead of 'takes...'
5, alright, comma and 'now, let me...' (missing comma)
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Okay - I implemented all those - #3 was strange as it had a special character instead of the apostrophe...
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Originally Posted by Dohi64
and the last one (only 5 attachments are allowed per post).
6, 'a mage' instead of 'the mage' (twice)
oh yeah, I did a search in the .lng files, this is the file with the 'first of all' missing the comma:
eng_chat_1481693153_1875701420.lng
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Okay, got those two, too!
Thanks for posting these - it is nice to have another set of eyes looking at all this and helping find errors!
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