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Originally Posted by major_setback
My try [Edit: using Robert Taylor's art]:
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Very good, major_setback
I like the first, and I like both texts.
It may be best to illustrate with the following narrative:
SPOTLIGHT
Spitfire vs Bf-109 in combat and to see tracer fire and machine gun
SECOND LEVEL
Stuka or Ju-88 that are attacked by Hurricanes and a burning plane in the sky
LANDSCAPE
Red sky over the coast. White Cliffs on the English Channel (eg the port of Dover as the outline of "major")
The whole image should look storm of war (for example a blood red sky color big storm) where the distance, the background, you see that there is great air battle.
Well ... that's how I imagine it ...
