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Srinidhalaya 06-15-2011 06:43 AM

The Dover Chronicles
 
Episode 2 is on Page 3

The Dover Chronicles
Episode 1

Page 1:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...laya/page1.jpg
Page 2:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...laya/page2.jpg
Page 3:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...laya/page3.jpg
Page 4:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...laya/page4.jpg
Page 5:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...laya/page5.jpg
Page 6:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...laya/page6.jpg

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Page 6:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w.../page6half.jpg
Page 7:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...laya/page7.jpg
Page 8:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...laya/page8.jpg
Page 9:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...laya/page9.jpg
Page 10:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...aya/page10.jpg
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http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...aya/page11.jpg
Page 12:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...aya/page12.jpg
Page 13:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...aya/page13.jpg
Page 14:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...aya/page14.jpg

Intermission


Page 15:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...aya/page15.jpg
Page 16:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...aya/page16.jpg
Page 17:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...aya/page17.jpg
Page 18:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...aya/page18.jpg
Page 19:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...aya/page19.jpg
Page 20:
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/w...aya/page20.jpg

Cheers!

SNAFU 06-15-2011 08:17 AM

Nice work, mate ;)

If you don´t mind a little rework, I would suggest to replace on

Page 7: Left bubble: "Wir sind getroffen" Right Bubble: "Wir sind unter Feuer" (We are under fire) or "Wir haben ein Feuer" (We have a fire here onboard)

Page 9: 109 jockey "Jetzt wirst du sterben, Tommy"

Page 10 "Jetzt habe ich Dich"

Otherwise it is quite charming the way it is now, keep it coming! ;)

grayson1337 06-15-2011 08:32 AM

I would suggest an alternative for SNAFUs correction for Page7: "Wir haben ein Feuer"
Try "Wir brennen!"

cheers ;)

BigPickle 06-15-2011 08:53 AM

wicked mate love the idea, just like reading Commando again, bravo!
S!

Redroach 06-15-2011 09:05 AM

Noooo, as I stated in the other thread: Leave that English German alone! For a native german speaker, it has its special charme! Leave it in there! :D

Fjordmonkey 06-15-2011 10:47 AM

Great stuff :D

palker4 06-15-2011 10:57 AM

where is the like button :) ?

Mysticpuma 06-15-2011 11:07 AM

Like the idea, really nice. Can you tell me what Plug-in you used in Photoshop to get that effect? Really cool. Cheers, MP

Rattlehead 06-15-2011 11:37 AM

Great work! It's just like reading a comic book.

MACADEMIC 06-15-2011 11:39 AM

Super Nice, thanks! :)

(indeed, where's the 'Like' button?).

MAC


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